OK, you were warned!!!

Anyway, for quite some time now I have been working on a song. I just completed it and I thought that I'd let you people be my lab rats and see if it hurts your system, then show other peuple :kid: Nah just kidding, but I did want you guys to see it first. Now before it is posted, does anyone have any objections?

NO hit me with it !!!!!!!!

OK, here goes. It's called Dicktator by the way :smartie:

Take a look around,
See what you’ve done,
Your so-called leadership,
Has gone terribly wrong

Take away your anarchists,
You’re not wanted anymore
Away with your ****ing un-fair-ness,
Turn around and there’s the door…

DICKTATOR! Why did you come?
DICKTATOR! Your time has come
To get on movin’
Out of this thing you call a
GOVERNMENT!

People fightin’,
Losin’ their lives,
Not that excitin’,
Do you realize?

DICKTATOR! Why did you come?
DICKTATOR! Your time has come
To get on movin’
Out of this thing you call a
GOVERNMENT!

lol, Terrible isn't it? I hold bridge responsible for all your deaths!:kid:

I think it sounds good! Aimed at anyone in particular? :wink2:

I think it's great - is there music to go with it?

Do oldies opinions count? Maybe I should say it's awful and not as jolly as that nice Kylie:unsure:

Do oldies opinions count? Maybe I should say it's awful and not as jolly as that nice Kylie:unsure:

Turn that music down will you. What happened to that lovely boy Jason:wink2:

I think it's great Jakey.:thumbsup:

Good stuff, JB.

Take a look around,
See what you’ve done,
Your so-called leadership,
Has gone terribly wrong

Take away your anarchists,
You’re not wanted anymore
Away with your ****ing un-fair-ness,
Turn around and there’s the door…

People fightin’,
Losin’ their lives,
Not that excitin’,
Do you realize?


I like it JB. I think the verses stand on their own very well as an anti-war poem.

I used to love writing song lyrics but quite quickly realised i didn't have a musical bone in my body and so turned to writing angst ridden poetry until I fell in love and that totally screwed up any angst I had! d'oh!

Do you write music? or do you have the "tune" (or whatever you young people call it!) in your head?

I was actually more focused on the words but I couple of times I stopped and just pictured a tune in my head.

PJ, not really aimed but I guess you could say it was aimed at my parents and teachers lol.

I'm glad you all like it and I'm in the middle of writing another.

PJ, not really aimed but I guess you could say it was aimed at my parents and teachers lol.



my goodness what a rum bunch they must be!

Mine were exactly the same Dol, but they grew out of it as I got older :wink2:

my goodness what a rum bunch they must be!

I kinda exaggerated a bit :kid: Then but some politics in it and BAM! a song:smartie:

Very Good (wild appaulse) woot woot.

lol Thanks bridge. I'm almost done on another and I'll post it here when it's done

Here's the next one. It's called Coffee and Ciggarettes:smartie: :

One puff and you’re hooked,
One sip and you’re alert,
They’re a fantastic combination,
But **** do they hurt!

Cigarettes and coffee,
Just for me,
Cigarettes and coffee,
Just what I need

They’re an addictive source,
But of course,
Like every other thing,
They’re the reasons for your health declining

Cigarettes and coffee,
Just for me,
Cigarettes and coffee,
Just what I need

Lungs,
Heart,
Brain,
DAMAGED!

They’re just for me,
Just what I need,
Who cares about the long terms?
Oh ****, here comes the heartburn!

Just remember us when you make your first million JB! :thumbsup:

I will lol

...and don't spend it all on cigarettes and caffeine!

lol I'll try not to Fee :)

Just wrote another:

I had full respect for you,
But now you’ve made me loose it all.
You took a switchblade knife,
Cut right down my back
Why would you do that to someone?

You’re a hypocrite,
Always talking ****.
Think you’re better than everyone,
But in truth,
You’re just as bad…

We were havin’ a laugh,
But you took it to all new lengths.
Going shallow at the last second.
Takin’ that blade was a big mistake,
And stabbin’ me was even worse…

You’re a hypocrite,
Always talking ****.
Think you’re better than everyone,
But in truth,
You’re just as bad…

We were friends and family,
Yet you go and do this to me?
But now I see,
You were keepin’ you’re friends close,
And enemies even closer…

You’re a hypocrite,
Always talking ****.
Think you’re better than everyone,
But in truth,
You’re just as bad…

You’re just as bad…
You’re just as bad…
You’re just as bad…

Better than me?
Go ***** a tree,
End the end you’ll get what you deserve
You make me twitch
You f*cken bitch
Choke you so you don’t make a sound

We don’t love you can’t you notice
Don’t think we care if you’re here or alive
Coz we’re fed up with your sh*t
Don’t come near us and we’ll all be fine
YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC!

Sh*tty car
You stuff your bra
You little tomato chested bitch
You’d kill a duck
With an army truck
You inhuman worthless dog

We don’t love you can’t you notice
Don’t think we care if you’re here or alive
Coz we’re fed up with your sh*t
Don’t come near us and we’ll all be fine
YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC!

Wannabe, stuff you
I bloody hate you
I’d like to see you get jabbed in the eye
Bulimic
You miss every trick
I feel so good when I see you cry

We don’t love you can’t you notice
Don’t think we care if you’re here or alive
Coz we’re fed up with your sh*t
Don’t come near us and we’ll all be fine
YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC! YOU SPASTIC!

Sorry JB, but I find this offensive; spastic is a term that is used in a derogative manner about people with cerebral palsy - making fun of people with disabilities isn't big or clever IMO.

Not sure what your motivation was in posting this, tbh.

Sorry JB, but I find this offensive; spastic is a term that is used in a derogative manner about people with cerebral palsy - making fun of people with disabilities isn't big or clever IMO.

Not sure what your motivation was in posting this, tbh.

I agree with you Floops. I read the above and felt quite shocked. i think the fact you are so young doesnt help.


I know kids (and me) adore Eminem, and his lyrics are shocking .... but they havent physically written them. Im assuming you wrote the above Jakey - and i dont like it.

Yeah I wrote it and I'm soooo sorry you hate it. It really bothers me... (Eminem sucks by the way) Anyway, "spastic" may be some disease but incase you haven't noticed, it has become more of a insult.

My motivation, well I did say I'd be posting every song I wrote here so I guess that's it.

Incase anyone cares, this was about my god-sister and how much she annoys the crap out of everyone around her. But you probably don't care since this week is "Hate JakeyBoy" week... :glare: